http://onlinetoeflcourse.com/ Interested in becoming one of Michael's STEALTH students of the One and Only 7-Step System to Pass The TOEFL Test? Click on the link to become one of Michael's students. The sooner you click, the faster you will achieve 26 and 24 points on the speaking and writing sections of the TOEFL iBT. In Michael's Online TOEFL Course, you can also practice until you can score 22 on the reading and listening sections of the exam. ==================================== Can you imagine that professional athletes and entertainers can earn millions of dollars for one year? The ordinary like us can never achieve that. However, I totally agree with the opinion that the famous athletes and entertainers deserve the high salaries because they contribute a lot to society, they are under high risks and they are extremely hard working. First of all, the professional athletes and entertainers contribute a lot to society. They not only make money for themselves, but also bring huge benefits to relevant industries. During the world cup in 2014, many football stars earned much money, for exampleArjen Robben, James Rodriguez and Philipp Lahm. They also brought profit to several industries. People from all around the word flied to Brazil to watch the football games, which increased the profit of airline companies. Fans went to clubs to watch the games on the TV until midnight, which brought huge benefits to clubs and beer companies. And people bought word cup souvenirs, which drove the development of manufacturing industries. Thus, the super stars contributed a lot to the whole society. The second reason why I agree with the opinion is that their high salaries are always with high risks on both bodies and careers. On the one hand, fierce competition can lead to injuries. Players always get injured in some practice and matches. Once they get badly wounded, the hurt may linger on for the rest of their lives. Sanglan, an athlete in Chinese women's gymnastics team, became paralyzed in one game in 1998. That was a huge pain for her whole life. On the other hand, once the athletes and entertainers get aged, they can’t have enough energy for training and get high salaries any more. Therefore, they don’t have stable incomes to support their lives. What’s more, god rewards someone who works hard. Athletes and entertainers can get such high salaries because they have paid countless sweat and efforts. Jolin, a famous singer in Asia, had practiced singing day and night for many years before starting her career. Yangmi, an actress in China, kept acting even when she was pregnant. To sum up, the athletes and entertainers do deserve the high salaries they get, because they pay more efforts, suffer more pains and contribute more to the society.
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